Tuesday 27 December 2011

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Well done Desmond. You have creatively shown M's development and transformation throughout the play. You have brought in some good examples from the play to show his integrity and loyalty and his change from it. I like how you referred to Neptune's seas. You have definitely demonstrated his evolution as a character. when you reposted your journals, why did you not keep your EQ parts? They are still part of the assignment. Since i knew you had them, I went and reread them all, the beauty of the blog. Good work.

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